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Another excellent Haiku J'Varn! What a great idea to use your video clip on the post to make it even more interesting - I would be too scared to jump from that height. How did you know how to put a video clip on a blog? Here is my poem about walking in the rain: I like rainy days. Walking in the rain is fun. Hot cocoa after
Hello my brother helps me with the video and yes I do like your haiku poem it go with the weather here is one I made up in the car today People kite flying ocean blue but very cold boats passing rough sea bye J'varn
Hi J'varn, thank you for sharing your poem with us. Smart thinking to include the video clip alongside your poem. Great job on getting the syllable count correct for each line and super word choices to describe actions and feelings. Great work! Spelling tip: through (the air)
Haikus are my favourite types of poem as well, J'varn, these are great. Have you thought about writing one about the lockdown, you would have lots of ideas.
Kia ora, J'Varn. Another fantastic Haiku. Getting the syllable count right isn't always easy, so well done on that. Mr P is right, you'd definitely have lots of ideas about a lockdown Haiku. I look forward to reading more.
Hi J'varn, you are writing some lovely poems, keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrs Haines.
DeleteAnother excellent Haiku J'Varn!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea to use your video clip on the post to make it even more interesting - I would be too scared to jump from that height. How did you know how to put a video clip on a blog?
Here is my poem about walking in the rain:
I like rainy days.
Walking in the rain is fun.
Hot cocoa after
bye : )
Hello my brother helps me with the video and yes I do like your haiku poem it go with the weather
Deletehere is one I made up in the car today
People kite flying
ocean blue but very cold
boats passing rough sea bye J'varn
Hi J'Varn, here's my next Lockdown Haiku:
DeleteNot out and about,
finding other things to do.
Quietly waiting.
Here is a guide I made to show you how to put a video clip onto a blog post. Let me know if you try : )
How to insert a video on a blog post
bye : )
Thank you I try this . good Haiku .
DeleteHi J'varn, thank you for sharing your poem with us. Smart thinking to include the video clip alongside your poem. Great job on getting the syllable count correct for each line and super word choices to describe actions and feelings. Great work!
ReplyDeleteSpelling tip: through (the air)
Oops Thank you
DeleteHaikus are my favourite types of poem as well, J'varn, these are great. Have you thought about writing one about the lockdown, you would have lots of ideas.
ReplyDeleteSame my lock down Haiku is on my blog Thx you Mr P.
DeleteKia ora, J'Varn. Another fantastic Haiku. Getting the syllable count right isn't always easy, so well done on that. Mr P is right, you'd definitely have lots of ideas about a lockdown Haiku. I look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteI clap my hands it helps me Thx you.
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