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Hi J'Varn I love how your haiku poem ties in so well with your video as it really captures what is happening. Well done also on keeping to the haiku syllable rule of 5, 7, 5. It's not always easy. Is that you in the video? I am not sure that I would be brave enough to jump from that height.
Hi J'varn, Megan told me that you're doing lots of work on the blog and she is really impressed with your haiku poems. You inspired me to write one about school today. I'm not sure if I've got it quite correct - you can mark it for me! All quiet at school in the distance one child's voice and a bouncing ball
Hello, I Like your Haiku poem about school, you get a 10/10 .i had to clap my hand 3x to get the syllables right all quiet at school.. im writing another Haiku poem about my favourite tree to climb the Pohutukawa its 700 years old,down in Te Puru. bye Jvarn
Hi J'Varn
ReplyDeleteI love how your haiku poem ties in so well with your video as it really captures what is happening. Well done also on keeping to the haiku syllable rule of 5, 7, 5. It's not always easy.
Is that you in the video? I am not sure that I would be brave enough to jump from that height.
Hi Sarah I like haiku poems and yes it is me jumping off the rockface and it fun for me and my cousins
ReplyDeleteHi J'Varn. You are definitely braver than I am.
DeleteHi J'varn, Megan told me that you're doing lots of work on the blog and she is really impressed with your haiku poems. You inspired me to write one about school today. I'm not sure if I've got it quite correct - you can mark it for me!
ReplyDeleteAll quiet at school
in the distance one child's voice
and a bouncing ball
Hello, I Like your Haiku poem about school, you get a 10/10 .i had to clap my hand 3x to get the syllables right all quiet at school..
Deleteim writing another Haiku poem about my favourite tree to climb the Pohutukawa its 700 years old,down in Te Puru.
bye Jvarn