Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work. This year our school focus is "In Our Backyard". Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work. Thank you for taking the time to support my learning journey!
Cool story ideas J'Varn! I like the way you have combined everyday brother and sister arguments with bears and telekinesis. I hope you keep writing this story, I want to know what task they will have to complete. It will also be good to find out more about the animals you have mentioned. Remember to keep rereading your work to make sure it makes sense, you can try reading out loud and see if that helps. Also be sure to add lots of describing words to give the reader all the information you can. Did you know there are other students in Room 7 writing stories on their blogs? You might want to check them out : ) Niamh's story Ashleigh's Diary Franny's Brazilian adventure bye : )
Wow J'Varn I really enjoyed reading your story. I especially liked reading about the adventures that Olivia and Logan had...a pink dolphin, I found it so interesting that I googled pink dolphin. I found out that they are the largest species of fresh water dolphin and live in the Amazon River. Amazing!!
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Cool story ideas J'Varn! I like the way you have combined everyday brother and sister arguments with bears and telekinesis. I hope you keep writing this story, I want to know what task they will have to complete. It will also be good to find out more about the animals you have mentioned. Remember to keep rereading your work to make sure it makes sense, you can try reading out loud and see if that helps. Also be sure to add lots of describing words to give the reader all the information you can. Did you know there are other students in Room 7 writing stories on their blogs? You might want to check them out : )
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Franny's Brazilian adventure bye : )
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Wow J'Varn I really enjoyed reading your story. I especially liked reading about the adventures that Olivia and Logan had...a pink dolphin, I found it so interesting that I googled pink dolphin. I found out that they are the largest species of fresh water dolphin and live in the Amazon River. Amazing!!
ReplyDeleteyes one day I would like to see one too, I search up the Amazon jungle , then images show animals live in the Amazon , then I saw the pink dolphin .
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