My Auckland and beyond slide with poster

 Hi blooger I am showing you my Auckland beyond slide with poster I think you should go to this place on my poster cause its good and there is no covid. 

My super dooper coin operated writing

Hi Bloggers J'varn here I will be showing you my coin operated writing. This is my planing  link to video

Sentence 1

(character/scene)

So basically the boy and the mum were going to the supermarket it was about 1981 then the boy stopped he saw a rocket ‘’Mum mum can I go on the rocket I will go to space’’ ‘’Ok Micheal you can go on it’’ ‘’Yay thanks mum’’ ‘’Your welcome’’ ‘’321 blast off’’ ‘’What what happened’’ *Throws helmet* ‘’Sorry Michael did’nt work’’.

Sentence 2

(character/scene)

 After they got home the boy was sad because he cound’nt go to space.

Sentence 3

(Conflict)

So he had a idea he was going to do a lemonade stand and save up lots and lots of money 

Sentence 4

(Conflict)

But he did’nt have time because he was very old so he had to do it. It was his dream 

Sentence 5

(resolution)

After when he had saved up lots of money he went to the rocket but he was in his 70s so if he did he would die straght away 

Sentence 6

(how characters have changed)

Well when he was at the rocket it would not work but he did’nt notice that he had too much money but it worked and he wanted to spend is last time on earth and see space for the first time.And here is my actual writing

One time in the afternoon at 3:00 in the Caribbean there was a boy his name was Micheal he loved flying rockets then he stopped he saw a toy rocket but he thought it was a real one so he said ‘’Mum can I go on the rocket please’’ ‘’Okay’’ ‘’Yay I am gonna go to space’’ *he goes on the rocket*  * it just rocks back and forth* * Throws helmet on floor*  ‘’ Sorry  it did’nt work’’ ‘’it's fine but I will go to space’’ ‘’I bet you will’’  

70 years later ‘’ I have finally done it I am going to space ‘’  ‘’ 321’’ '' Blast off''. I find it hard to actually build up the story cause it does take some time and you really have to think.

Blog you later  

 

 

The present writing

 Hi Bloggers J'varn here. Today I did the writing The Present I found it hard to build up the story but after I started writing it it got easier and easier. Link to Video.

When Jake’s mum came back from work the bring a gift “Jake I am home’’ ‘’Oh hey mum what’s for dinner I am hungry’’ ‘’Pizza oh and a got a gift for you why don’t you open it’’ ‘’ok’’ ‘’Woah cool a puppy’’ ‘’woof woof’’ ‘’ Ugh the dog only has three legs’’ ‘’ So Jake you only have one and the dog has three’’ ‘’Whatever mum I don’t care’’ ‘’Jake I think you do care that’s why I got the dog cause it was happy with only three legs so I just thought that it would make you happy’’ ‘’Well he is happy so I should be happy only if I have 1 leg’’  ‘’mum we are going outside’’ ‘’ ok I am just going to call someone’’ ‘’ ok mum’’ ‘’Hey thanks for the puppy’’ ‘’ oh no worries I am sure Jake would of loved it’’ ‘’ Yeah he loved the puppy and after all you did need to do something after all cause you are his dad’’ ‘’ yeah well bye’’ ‘’bye’’. And here is the planing.

There was a boy siting on the couch in the living room playing video game Afterwards, the boy started caring for the puppy and started playing with the ball then looked at the sunset. So the boy didn't like the puppy cause it had 3 legs and he didn't like because he had 2 legs The boy released that it didn't matter if you had two or three legs you only live once so you might as well do whatever you can After the boy and the puppy played together he didn’t care about his one leg because the puppy made him realize that it doesn't matter. Well the boy went I don’t care about the puppy then he turned in to happy. Blog you later