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Pitched dark and icy cold the two sisters found the long curly pole. Looking up into the glowing beam the sisters jump into the portal, to take them in to the world of the sleeping giants.
Kia orana J'Varn, looks like you've done it again. Another terrific piece of descriptive writing. What do you think the sisters might say to one another when they land in the world of sleeping? Could you write their dialogue?
Kia orana J'Varn, looks like you've done it again. Another terrific piece of descriptive writing. What do you think the sisters might say to one another when they land in the world of sleeping? Could you write their dialogue?
ReplyDeleteHi J'Varn, I agree with Megan, I would love to read more, you have certainly hooked the reader in!
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