Wednesday, 19 August 2020

My writing

 


Misty foggy morning skyscraper climbing. All alone on the red bridge. The man is undaunted  by the height,He shows no fear he is harness free and takes in the sights around him. He is free just another day in Burj Khalifa ( Tallest building in the world)

2 comments:

  1. Great writing, J'varn. You would have to be pretty brave not to feel daunted being at the top of the Burj Khalifa, wouldn't you?

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  2. Ata mārie J'Varn, sensational writing! You have used some great vocabulary to describe the scene. I wouldn't be undaunted by the height. I remember being on the bridges at Treetops in Rotorua and that was plenty high enough for me!
    How will you continue the story? Will your main character see something from this great height? Will he be put in danger? The story is yours to imagine...

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