Friday 6 August 2021

The present writing

 Hi Bloggers J'varn here. Today I did the writing The Present I found it hard to build up the story but after I started writing it it got easier and easier. Link to Video.

When Jake’s mum came back from work the bring a gift “Jake I am home’’ ‘’Oh hey mum what’s for dinner I am hungry’’ ‘’Pizza oh and a got a gift for you why don’t you open it’’ ‘’ok’’ ‘’Woah cool a puppy’’ ‘’woof woof’’ ‘’ Ugh the dog only has three legs’’ ‘’ So Jake you only have one and the dog has three’’ ‘’Whatever mum I don’t care’’ ‘’Jake I think you do care that’s why I got the dog cause it was happy with only three legs so I just thought that it would make you happy’’ ‘’Well he is happy so I should be happy only if I have 1 leg’’  ‘’mum we are going outside’’ ‘’ ok I am just going to call someone’’ ‘’ ok mum’’ ‘’Hey thanks for the puppy’’ ‘’ oh no worries I am sure Jake would of loved it’’ ‘’ Yeah he loved the puppy and after all you did need to do something after all cause you are his dad’’ ‘’ yeah well bye’’ ‘’bye’’. And here is the planing.


There was a boy siting on the couch in the living room playing video game Afterwards, the boy started caring for the puppy and started playing with the ball then looked at the sunset. So the boy didn't like the puppy cause it had 3 legs and he didn't like because he had 2 legs The boy released that it didn't matter if you had two or three legs you only live once so you might as well do whatever you can After the boy and the puppy played together he didn’t care about his one leg because the puppy made him realize that it doesn't matter. Well the boy went I don’t care about the puppy then he turned in to happy. Blog you later




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