Friday, 21 May 2021

My favorite piece of writing for this week

     

                            HI blogers to day i will be showing you my favroite piece of writing from this week.I was exploring hawaii it was about 3:30 in the afternoon as I was scamper my way to

  the waterfall I was dying to get in. Blog you later 

4 comments:

  1. Kia ora J'varn My name is liberty and I am in R8

    I really like all the detail that yo have put into your writing.
    I really liked reading it.
    keep blogging bye!!!

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  2. Hi J'Varn, Sakina here. I really like your writing we have done it to but we don't have to post it. What was your favorite bit about the writing? Blog ya later, Sakina.

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    1. Kia ora Sakina . My favorite bet from my writing is as I was scamper my way to the waterfall.
      Blog you later

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  3. Hello J'varn,
    My name is Emma and i'm from Room 24!
    I really like how you put some detail into it and didn't make is like 5,6 or 7 of sentences you just made 1. I think you could add like maybe 1 or 2 sentences I have done this as well! Check out my blog! Keep up the good work!
    Why did you decide it was at 3:30?
    Bye bye blog you later!
    Emma

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