I was in this dark cursed place it was 5 mins before 12 am what means 5 mins before Friday 13th tik tok tik tok BOOM 12:00 am friday the 13th. I feel anxious I can hear screaming and I can see blood on the window and I can see bats everywhere.
It's my favorite piece of writing this week because I had a good picture to get ideas very easily.
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Hi J'Varn, Dayelle here from Room 23.
ReplyDeleteI really love your writing! Can you post more of your writing?
Blog ya later,
Dayelle:)
Kia ora J'Varn, spooky writing! I like the way you used onomatopoeia with the clock ticking, it gives your story tension. Next time, you could read your work out loud to check where the punctuation needs to go. blog you later, Megan : )
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