Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work. This year our school focus is "In Our Backyard". Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work. Thank you for taking the time to support my learning journey!
Kia ora J'Varn, great to see you posting your work online. I can see you have thought carefully about what words to use. I particularly like: "scorching", "spewing" and "gushing" - it created a picture in my mind of just how dangerous volcanoes can be. You can be proud of your mahi (work). Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia ora J'Varn, your poems look and sound very HOT! You are such an expert at Haikus so I'm not surprised you have got the syllable count correct. I think you are describing a Lava Flow eruption in your Haiku. Am I right? If you go to Libby's blog you can see amazing footage of a Lava Flow eruption in Iceland. It is on a link on Slide 2. Here is the link to her blog post. Blog you later : )
Hi JVam It's Sophia here from room 24. I really like your slide but just maybe you could write something about what you did and leave a question. That remind me of when I did that slide. What was your favourite thing that you did on that slide? blog you later.
Kia ora J'Varn, great to see you posting your work online. I can see you have thought carefully about what words to use. I particularly like: "scorching", "spewing" and "gushing" - it created a picture in my mind of just how dangerous volcanoes can be. You can be proud of your mahi (work).
ReplyDeleteKia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
Kia ora J'Varn, your poems look and sound very HOT! You are such an expert at Haikus so I'm not surprised you have got the syllable count correct. I think you are describing a Lava Flow eruption in your Haiku. Am I right? If you go to Libby's blog you can see amazing footage of a Lava Flow eruption in Iceland. It is on a link on Slide 2. Here is the link to her blog post.
ReplyDeleteBlog you later : )
Hi JVam
ReplyDeleteIt's Sophia here from room 24.
I really like your slide but just maybe you could write something about what you did and leave a question. That remind me of when I did that slide. What was your favourite thing that you did on that slide? blog you later.