Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work. This year our school focus is "In Our Backyard". Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work. Thank you for taking the time to support my learning journey!
Kia Ora J'varn. What a beautiful sentence starter! The structure of your writing really catches my mind and the descriptive sentences. Keep up the good work J'varn - but maybe you should check your greeting and put a capital letter after the full stop thats ends the sentence 'I have done'. Thank you for sharing your learning with us!
Kia Ora J'Varn. Thanks for posting this, I think you should be proud of such wonderful descriptive writing! I'm looking forward to seeing your next journey into Fantasy Writing....
Hi Zion-li here from Room 6. I think that your description on this poem is really good and really gives me a picture in my head of what it looks like. What else can you show me??? blog ya later!!!
Kia Ora J'varn. What a beautiful sentence starter! The structure of your writing really catches my mind and the descriptive sentences. Keep up the good work J'varn - but maybe you should check your greeting and put a capital letter after the full stop thats ends the sentence 'I have done'. Thank you for sharing your learning with us!
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Kia Ora J'Varn. Thanks for posting this, I think you should be proud of such wonderful descriptive writing! I'm looking forward to seeing your next journey into Fantasy Writing....
ReplyDeleteHi Zion-li here from Room 6. I think that your description on this poem is really good and really gives me a picture in my head of what it looks like. What else can you show me??? blog ya later!!!
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